Well, I have never written a critique before, but I think this is a beautiful piece of artwork! The anatomy of the character is superb! You created the feel of movement in both the wisps and the Shymna exceedingly well, and the beautiful arrangement of glowing colors is a marvelous addition to this piece. My personal favorite part of this piece, however, is the feathered tail. It moves to perfectly with the body, and the sparkles are so subtle but gorgeous. All in all, I think this is a great picture, and I wish you best of luck in the draw to adopt contest